Tuesday 13 April 2021

JA two truths and a lie

i enjoyed making this peice of writting becuase i got to make up a fictanil story. i found it tricky to finish it on time becuase i had three storys. Next time i would change the writting becuase there are alot more stories.

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  1. nice Jaden it was really exciting and you put heaps of detail and you did really good

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  3. Hi Jaden, its Rayhan from New Windsor School. I liked how you wrote about when your friend came to visit you. What inspired you to do this type of work?

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